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Sakura's Body Part Swap: The Wish
The hot steam hit Sakura's face as she walked onto the hot spring, Spring break had just started and Sakura was very happy to be on break because she had earn it for all things she did for Tsunade and the first thing that she would do is relax, "oh Kami I needed this!" moaned Sakura as she dipped in the warm, usually Sakura would wear her blue bra and shorts but today she diecided to go all out as she was in her birthday suit, Sakura swim around a bit in the pool and then settle next to the fence that separated the boys bath with the girls bath, "I wonder were Naruto and Sai are? They must be on break too" thought Sakura but then she heard an noise behind the fence, "Naruto are you…?" said a voice, "yeah I know but I would get caught!" said another voice, Sakura recognized the voices as Sai and Naruto "so they are here and I know what they doing" thought Sakura beginning to get angry but she waited to confirm her thought, suddenly a thud was hear and small parts the wood were popped out  and a small hole was made and Naruto's blue eyes looked though the small hole, "oh man Sai you have got to see this!" whisper Naruto, Sakura grip her fist in anger, " I have dealt with your perversion Naruto but not today on my Vacation!" thought Sakura has she got up and was about to punch through the hole into Naruto face when Naruto said "oh Sai you should the girls in the back!", Sakura stopped and turn to the direction Naruto mention and saw four beautiful woman, the women were older but they had beautiful faces, well developed bodies, long following hair and perfect tans, "they look so hot!" said Naruto, Sakura put down her fist and sank back, ever since was little Sakura was worried about her looks especially her large forehead and when she saw the beautiful women she felt terrible and she looked down at her body, Sakura was disappointed at how she grown and developed, she only had A-cup breast that were barely visible, she had a plain body with no curves, her hair wasn't shiny or long but scraggy and short, her face was pretty but not as gorgeous as the four women,  Sakura was now depress and she felt that her day was ruined and so she swam towards the girls changing rooms. It was night time and Sakura stood on her room deck and looked at the night time stars, "I hate my body…." Said Sakura still a little depressed, "everybody in the village has developed, Ino, Tenten and hell even Hinata! Why is my body still the same!? *sigh*I don't even know why I ask Naruto if I have grown more womanly" said Sakura and she stared into the night sky, she was scanning the night sky when she spotted a star that was shining more brightly than the others, "oh it's a wishing star… maybe" said Sakura, she put her hands on heart and said the wish in her head, "I wish I could change my body", Sakura stood on the deck waiting for something to happen but nothing happen, "*sigh* it was only a dream" said Sakura as she head back to her room to get ready for bed but as she left the Star became more bright and it was shining straight onto Sakura.
hey there! all characters belong to thier rightful owners! no stealing!
this is the start of Sakura's Body Part Swap and i need your help choosing the first victim of the Body Part Swap? here are some ideas
you can also help me write the story
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Shizuka100 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2014
Srry bout the multi Fave, Site was being stupid & wouldn't let me fave this in the right file.
DAVE37 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2014
DreadedOne131 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Careful what you wish for! :D
DAVE37 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014
Kitten-Bubblepuff Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It may sound pathetic, but I actually cried when I read this. ;-; I am built like Sakura and I hate my body. I feel so plain compared to other girls and I can totally relate to Sakura and her insecurities. 
DAVE37 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014
i'm so sorry....
Kitten-Bubblepuff Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Meh, I can live with it. I probably sounded really whiny just now! LOL sorry. It's just kind of hard not to be insecure in a society that's obsessed with boobs. But ever since I started watching Shakugan No Shana, I've felt a little better about it because I love Shana.
BlueSpartan2 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2013
Ever though of revising this, correcting spelling errors, formatting it better so it isn't just a clump of words? Not trying to sound like an ass, its just not pretty to look at and read.
jahnah Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
the second part of this writtten yet?
DAVE37 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012
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